Archive for the ‘along the shore’ Category
including ‘sound’ in writing
I am so proud of my new poetry book ‘mnemonic – soundscape and birdsong’ (Chapel Street Editions, 2024) because it focuses on including sound in writing. Of the five senses (vision, hearing, touch, smell and taste), most creative writing focuses on vision. It is a bit of a challenge to include the other senses in order to give a more complete idea of the sensations contributed by your surroundings.
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My book includes bird song as a main part of the soundscape. It also includes other sounds: the singing of a rock skipped across a frozen pond, the call of the spring peepers, the clinking of ice in glasses, the sound of a kettle boiling over a woodland fire.
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For ways of including sounds in writing, you can look at some of my earlier posts here, and here.
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I think my favourite poem in the ‘mnemonic’ collection is about my Dad who took us along the Yarmouth shore to find iron pyrite (fool’s gold). The sounds in this poem focus on the shorebirds. Here is a short excerpt:
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he takes us prospecting
we wedge into crevasses
keen for pyrite gold
cube within cube
embedded in stone
we always forget the hammer
we chip and scratch with fingernails
reach across rock
dare the waves
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a sanderling cries
quit quit!
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shorebirds
befriend me
a dowitcher sews a seam with her bill
bastes salt water to shore
the sanderling shoos back the tide
terns
plunge into the ocean
and complain they are wet
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I hope you will have fun incorporating sound into your writing.
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All my best,
Jane
exploring the legendary 2
Interesting and different weekend!!! I participated via webcam in The Quest, an effort to gather more information about the Loch Ness Monster. This was a weekend organized by The Loch Ness Centre. To add my bit to the effort, I stayed right at home and observed remotely.
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I watched the webcam at Lochend for 6 hours from 7:00 AM to 1:00 PM Atlantic Time (11:00 AM to 17:00 PM Scotland Time). It was not boring. This was partly because there was a lot to see: people on the opposite shore, birds and flocks of birds, sailing ships, speed boats, and cruisers, and a couple of things I couldn’t identify. I recorded my observations every 1 to 2 minutes and took some screenshots.
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Loch Ness is a long, narrow lake (27 km long) in the Scottish Highlands. The area where I watched is at Lochend, near Caledonia Canal, the northern outlet of the Loch. The webcam panned back and forth, showing the water and land between a long narrow beach to the north and a point of land to the south (near Dores).
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Most of the boat traffic I saw came from or went into the Canal.
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I quickly found, because the webcam moved on a pivot, I would not see a continuous sequence of events in any one area. For this reason, I divided the viewing area into four sectors (A, B, C, and D) so I could identify the sector where any particular action was occurring.
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The wind was blowing, so the water was choppy and riffled. The water of the Loch is also very reflective, so elements of the shoreline are reflected in the water. All of this means that waves appear long and thin, are constantly moving and appear darker near the shore — easy to make an observer think they have seen a long dark serpent-like monster.
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Some of the things I saw:
birds, individually or in flocks, on the water and in the air…
… ships of various types: sailboats, cruisers, speedboats and canoes…
… and people, in small groups, on the opposite shore, walking, swimming, canoeing, watching…
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I also saw two things I couldn’t identify. One was a dark ripple in the water of Sector B that moved northward for about 9 minutes and then disappeared. Another was a white, stationary blob that only appeared for about a minute, also in Sector B. I made photos of these for the Loch Ness Centre, but didn’t get photos of my own. I submitted these two and I understand I will eventually hear if they were observations of interest. Neither would win any prizes in the ‘looked like Nessie’ category!!!!
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All my best,
Jane
(a.k.a. Alexandra)
exploring the legendary
All my life, I have been interested in legend, and in particular the creatures of legend: the Ogopogo, the Sasquatch, the little folk, the Loch Ness Monster and so on. Perhaps it is my general interest in biology, my writing about science fiction and my love of story. I also know that we humans do not know ‘everything.’ Each day I learn of a new species I have never known about before. Or I hear of the discovery of a new plant or animal. Or I marvel at how strange nature really is.
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For these reasons, when I heard on CBC that there would be a new, concentrated search for the Loch Ness Monster, the first such effort since the 1970s, I thought it would be interesting to participate. The Loch Ness Centre is organizing The Quest for the weekend of August 26 and 27, 2023. The weekend effort will include observations by volunteers at arranged locations along the shore, as well as explorations by drone and underwater devices.
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I am not traveling to Scotland any time soon, but the interview said people could take part remotely via webcam. So, I went to the website and now I am registered to watch Loch Ness for five hours on Sunday.
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I will be watching the webcam at Lochend, near the outlet of the Loch. The webcam swings back and forth, so I will get a full view, constantly changing. Watching a bit of water for five hours will present challenges, no doubt, but I will prepare myself for a long haul with water and snacks and lots of enthusiasm. Botanists are used to watching plants grow, so I am looking forward to this new adventure! Here are a couple of views of the area I’ll be watching.
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The participants have had a briefing and a briefing package. This weekend, there is a preparation presentation via Facebook and wrap-up sessions at the end of each day, also via Facebook.
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I will have fun and perhaps I’ll spot something of interest. The organizers tell us to expect to see water craft, floating logs, standing waves, debris, and, yes, perhaps even Nessie!!!!!!
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You can also participate. The organizers have said that latecomers are welcome. Just look at the website above to discover how to join in.
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All my best,
Jane Tims
(a.k.a. Alexandra)
A botanical life list first
Today, we drove to St. Stephen from our home near Fredericton (New Brunswick). We traveled some back roads, getting some great glimpses of the St, Croix River. The St. Croix is an international waterway, so when we look across the river, we see the United States.
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Along one stream in the drainage, we found a beyond-bright red flower I knew right away but have never seen except in photos.
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The cardinal flower (Lobelia cardinalis) was one of the first flowers I read about when I moved to New Brunswick, but this is the first time I have seen it in bloom.
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The red colour is so bright against the darker colours of the water and leaves. The plant is pollinated by hummingbirds.
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In New Brunswick, the cardinal flower grows in wet areas, along shores and on rocky islands in streams.
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The plant is about a half-metre or more in height and bears its flowers in terminal spikes. The flower has three spreading lower petals and two upper petals; all are united into a tube at the base. The stem is erect with pointed elliptical leaves.
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Like birders, most botanists keep track of the plants they know and have seen in the field. I am delighted to add this to my list of known plants!
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Have a great day! Stay cool!
Jane
goslings
On our drive last weekend to the Spednic Lake area, we saw this sight along the road by North Lake …. three Canada geese and their goslings …. two rather unevenly sized families.
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Copyright Jane Tims 2017
contemplation
contemplation
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still
as though cast
in bronze
mounted on rock
she watches
a strider
skate across
the surface
tension of water
ponders
his agility
the soundless stretch
of the meniscus
dimples on the water
thoughts
barely touch
the shallows
faded as the gentle
brush
of patina
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Copyright Jane Tims 2015
along the lake shore
along the lake shore
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shore verbs
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water simmers at the edge
waves lounge on the shore
discuss the scudding clouds
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red pine
catches wind
with sticky fingers
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violets nod
trout lilies tire
fringed loosestrife
hangs its yellow head
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a spring leaps from the hillside
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Copyright Jane Tims 2015
walk on the shore
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ignition
Sea-rocket (Cakile edentula Hook.)
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clumps of Sea-rocket
are splashes of lime on sand
missiles from lavender flowers
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pepper to tongue
pungent breath of Cakile
cardamom and caraway
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flavour our laughter
giggles of gulls cross sober sand
intervention in sluggish lives
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launches from Cape Canaveral
moon-walking on the beach
splash-downs in Sargasso Seas
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most days are moth-eaten –
paper cuts, missives, e-mails to answer
problems, resolutions without teeth
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the seawind smooths its sand
begs for someone to take a stick
scratch out a love song
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Copyright 2015 Jane Tims
summer on the river
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St. John River, south of Fredericton
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drinks on the patio
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the setting spins
on the river
golden while the mayflies dance
with gilded wings
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this is conversation!
a cold glass
singing ice
white wicker
umbrella shade
the hills
wistful beyond the gauze
of mayfly dancing
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you are dazzled by the play of sun
and words on water
your voice
your smile
who cares what you are saying
as long as the lines are long
and the tone is light
and the mayflies stir
the air above the river
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I listen
with a nod of my head
a flutter of my hand
the corners of my mouth lift
to smile
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my ears and eyes
have better things to do
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the sunlight slides on cobwebs
spun across the river
our voices slur
while the mayflies dance
the rise and fall
of their glass bodies
and your laughter
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liquid on water
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St. John River, south of Fredericton
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Published as ‘drinks on the patio’, Pottersfield Portfolio 17 (3), Spring 1997.
Copyright 2015 Jane Tims
washday
A few years ago, we took a vacation to les Îles de la Madeleines, also known as the Magdalen Islands, in the Gulf of Saint Lawrence and part of the Province of Quebec. We loved the ferry rides to and from the Islands, the endless white sand beaches, the artisans, and the demonstrations of wind sailing. Most of all, I loved the colourful houses. I always planned to try to capture the beaches and those houses in a painting. I finally completed my tryptic called ‘washday #1’, ‘washday #2’ and ‘washday #3’.
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June 9, 2015 ‘washday#1’ Jane Tims
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June 9, 2015 ‘washday#2’ Jane Tims
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June 9, 2015 ‘washday#3’ Jane Tims
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And the three together:
June 9, 2015 ‘washday’ Jane Tims
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Copyright 2015 Jane Tims
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