poetry and prose about place

along the lake shore

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along the lake shore


shore verbs


water simmers at the edge

waves lounge on the shore

discuss the scudding clouds


red pine

catches wind

with sticky fingers


violets nod

trout lilies tire

fringed loosestrife

hangs its yellow head


a spring leaps from the hillside





Copyright Jane Tims 2015

Written by jane tims

July 27, 2015 at 7:14 am

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  1. I remember seeing fringed loosestrife in a wood and trying to figure out what it was, years ago. Nice verse, Jane!

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    Watching Seasons

    July 28, 2015 at 12:56 pm

    • Hi. I love this little yellow flower … Seems to miss out on the world with its face always pointing down! Jane


      jane tims

      July 28, 2015 at 1:12 pm

  2. Ooooh. I love this poem, Jane. I would like to lounge on the lake shore with the waves.

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    July 27, 2015 at 10:03 am

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