blackberries
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blackberries
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floricanes bend
with August weight
shape an archway
show the path
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through brambles
to lake
pergola unfastens
gate, entices
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pickers
into wicked thorns
sweet indigo
temptation
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primocanes snag
hems of gloves
ankles of socks
handles of baskets
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angry scratch
for every berry
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Copyright Jane Tims 2019
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Hope you are enjoying this blackberry summer.
All my best,
Jane
Without context, some might take floricane colloquial term for a Florida hurricane. Both floricane and primocane are new words for me, and I assume for most readers.
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Steve Schwartzman
August 22, 2019 at 11:19 am
Yes, I often use terms in my poems that are unfamiliar. Thanks for the comment because, used to these terms, I am not always understanding of the confusion. I often include footnotes with poems, to explain unfamiliar terms and likely this one would be a footnote candidate!
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jane tims
August 22, 2019 at 6:25 pm