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new-fallen snow

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On this wintry day … finding the right words to describe new-fallen snow …

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newfall: words escape me

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the white ephemeral

perhaps frost

the fir boughs divided

the sculptured steel

of a flake of snow

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try again

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paper stencil

on  chocolate cake

powdered sugar

sifted on the rills

of the new plowed field

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again

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sweet in my mouth

the bitter melted in morning sun

white hot on my cheek

the writing lamp

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a lamp to the left

casts no shadow

(the shadow of a pen

or a hand)

(unless you are wrong-handed)

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chimney shadow

on a fresh-snowed roof

or trees on the eastern edge of the road

where the sun cannot warm

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the morning

dusting of ice

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try again

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Published as ‘newfall – words escape me’, the Fiddlehead 196, Summer 1998

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Copyright  2014  Jane Tims

Written by jane tims

February 5, 2014 at 7:00 am