poetry and prose about place

falling snow

with 6 comments




busy snow


pecks at

the window edge

lays cold feathers

along the glass

builds a humped man

around the backbone

of the mugo pine

startles the

grazing deer



Copyright  2014  Jane Tims




Written by jane tims

December 3, 2014 at 7:05 am

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  1. I thought the deer was a dog at first! Beautiful creature.


    Watching Seasons

    December 11, 2014 at 5:02 pm

  2. Awww! Look at that deer. So cute. I agree with Rebecca. You do create vivid pictures with your words.



    December 3, 2014 at 4:37 pm

  3. Vivid word pictures and a very cute deer!



    December 3, 2014 at 8:25 am

    • The deer stayed for a long time, lapping up the fallen sunflower seeds!


      jane tims

      December 3, 2014 at 9:43 am

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