poetry and prose about place


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Here we are in chill January. Days of snow and freezing rain, bitter cold and flooding and loss. Days when we don’t get enough sun to fill our requirement for Vitamin D.  Days when summer seems so far away.



As a retired person, my days are neither hectic nor sorrowful. My hours are filled with writing, painting, drawing, time on social media and an occasional meeting. I can go outside any time I want to get my dose of sunshine (if available). My stresses are few.


Once life was not so easy.  I worked long days and often came home tired and in a bad mood. But my husband and son made my days wonderful. I found this poem in my files, a testament to the way our families can inject hope into a slogging day! I wrote the poem in 2010, a couple of years before I retired.



Renewal is possible


I am entirely new today

some aspect of morning

has cast just-born skin

on me

the song sung by the kettle

the taste of the tea

the forecast of snow

the way you said goodbye

more like the promise of hello


most days lately

have tears at all the edges

too much to do

too little time

late nights

mugs of coffee, half-gulped

clocks and messages despised


through the day

I have waited for

old disappointments

to discover my face

but my noon coffee

has a hint of chocolate

and all my emails

are smile-embedded

and one of them from you



my husband getting pussy willows for me …


Copyright Jane Tims 2018

Written by jane tims

January 20, 2018 at 7:00 am

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  1. Perfect reminder for this time of year, Jane. Thanks for this post.


    Jane Fritz

    January 20, 2018 at 8:53 am

    • Hi Jane. Thanks! Hope you enjoyed my covered bridge book! Jane

      Liked by 1 person

      jane tims

      January 20, 2018 at 1:22 pm

      • Indeed. It is one of those books that keeps on giving! And, given the increasingly vulnerable state of our covered bridges, a timely project.


        Jane Fritz

        January 20, 2018 at 2:57 pm

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