poetry and prose about place

November first frost

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November first frost


air brittle, a broken

sliver of moon between

disrobing larches, silence

ruptured by craven’s cry





© Jane Tims  1995

Written by jane tims

November 3, 2014 at 6:50 am

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  1. We had a first frost yesterday – at least on the car windscreen. Loved the ‘sliver of moon between …’



    November 5, 2014 at 2:30 am

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