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hermit thrush – a poem put to song

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One of the poems in my new book ‘mnemonic’ is about my favourite bird – the hermit thrush (Catharus guttatus). Once you have listened to this bird singing in the woods, your life will be forever changed.

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Many thanks to Alan Edgar (alan@science-music.karoo.co.uk) who put the words of ‘hermit thrush’ to music after a study of the bird’s complex melody. ‘Hermit Thrush Song’ is the resulting musical arrangement. https://www.sheetmusicplus.com/title/hermit-thrush-song-soprano-with-pianoforte-digital-sheet-music/22120849. Thanks also to Mary Lee McKenna for playing the ‘Hermit Thrush Song’ on the piano for me, to help me know Alan Edgar’s melody.

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Here is ‘hermit thrush,’ an ‘author’s favourite’ poem in my book mnemonic.

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Hermit thrush

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Catharus guttatus

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neither visceral nor guttural, ethereal

tip-toe in tree tops

air pulled into taffy thread

a flute in the forest

froth on a wave

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rain trembles on leaf tips

guttation drops on strawberry

a lifted curtain of mayflower

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I saw you there

hidden in the thicket 

and I followed

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climb the ladder and sing

then step to the rung below

heads up, thoughts of the new day

parting of the beak

pulse at the throat

hairs lift

at the nape

of the neck, fingers

warble the keys

between middle and ring

catharsis

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This poem and drawing are with others in my poetry book ‘mnemonic,’ now available from Chapel Street Editions (https://chapelstreeteditions.com/book-catagories/poetry/mnemonic/ ). The book is also available at Westminster Bookmark in Fredericton and Dog Eared Books in Oromocto.

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Hope you love my book!

All my best….

Jane Tims

Written by jane tims

February 21, 2024 at 11:55 am

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  1. A beautiful poem and lovely drawing of the hermit thrush. I saw and heard my first one ever last fall.

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    Barbara Rodgers

    February 22, 2024 at 7:59 am

    • Hi Barbara. Thanks! They are wonderful to hear. Glad to hear from you. My blogging effort has been pitiful the last couple of years.

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      jane tims

      February 22, 2024 at 1:17 pm

      • I always enjoyed your drawings and poetry, Jane, and would love to see more of it when you’re up to the effort again. ♡

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        Barbara Rodgers

        February 23, 2024 at 7:40 am

      • thanks! more to come I am sure. …..lots of projects on the go. Blog lets me take stock as I work.

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        jane tims

        February 24, 2024 at 10:30 pm


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