nichepoetryandprose

poetry and prose about place

falling snow

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busy snow

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pecks at

the window edge

lays cold feathers

along the glass

builds a humped man

around the backbone

of the mugo pine

startles the

grazing deer

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Copyright 2014 Jane Tims

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Written by jane tims

December 3, 2014 at 7:05 am

Posted in strategies for winter

Tagged with bird feeder, deer, falling snow, poetry, snow, winter

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I thought the deer was a dog at first! Beautiful creature.

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Watching Seasons

December 11, 2014 at 5:02 pm

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- Hi. It was so tame. I think it stayed for an hour or more. Jane
  
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  jane tims
  
  December 11, 2014 at 5:44 pm
  
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Awww! Look at that deer. So cute. I agree with Rebecca. You do create vivid pictures with your words.

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Robin

December 3, 2014 at 4:37 pm

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- Hi. Thanks! He dug deeply into the snow to get the seeds! Jane
  
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  jane tims
  
  December 3, 2014 at 5:40 pm
  
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Vivid word pictures and a very cute deer!

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Rebecca

December 3, 2014 at 8:25 am

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- The deer stayed for a long time, lapping up the fallen sunflower seeds!
  
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  jane tims
  
  December 3, 2014 at 9:43 am
  
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