poetry and prose about place

in the apple orchard

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One of the spaces I loved the best on my grandfather’s farm was the apple orchard.  It was a small orchard, perhaps twenty trees.  I have never seen it in spring when the apple blossoms are in bloom, in fall when the trees are laden with fruit, or in winter when the stark bones of the trees are visible.  But I knew the orchard in summer, when the green canopies of the trees shed thick shade over the meadow grasses beneath.

an apple orchard in August


In summer, the orchard was usually a private space.  The farm yard could be bustling with people and animals, but the orchard was set apart.  It was a still room of dark and dapple. 

At the edge of the orchard was a green swing chair.  It was a braced frame with two benches, facing one another and suspended for swinging.  Four people could sit in comfort and sway genteelly to and fro.  Or a lone child could pump vigorously back and forth until one side of the frame lifted high with each upward swing and gave a satisfying lurch on its return.  I, of course, would never have done such a thing.

When I wasn’t pushing the swing to its limits, I was climbing apple trees, one in particular.  Its main side branch was as thick as its trunk and jutted out parallel to the ground.  A little jump and you could sit on it like a chair.  Swing a leg across and you had a horse.  Stand on it and you were in the crow’s nest of a sailing ship.  Sit down again, lean against the trunk and you had the ideal perch for reading the afternoon away.

an apple orchard in spring (photo by G. Tims)

The orchard was usually a private space.  But on Family Reunion Day, it was the focus of the festivities.  Big tables covered with white cloths were assembled in a line.  Enough chairs were unfolded for every person in our very large family.  Cars turned in at the driveway and claimed a spot in the farm yard.  Cousins rolled from the cars and were soon climbing and swinging in the orchard.  The table gradually filled with a conundrum of casseroles, bean pots, roasters and platters. 

After the eating was done, wire hoops went up for a game of croquet.  My Dad loved croquet and would show me all the tricks – how to get through the starting hoops in a single turn and how to ricochet off the goal post.  He also showed me how to bump up against the ball of another player and send their ball flying out of bounds on the next turn.  Armed with my learning, I gripped my croquet mallet, certain to win.  And realised my brothers and sister and some of the cousins had some strategies of their own!

After the Reunion was over and the last car was waved from the driveway, I was left alone in the orchard and it seemed more empty and silent than before.

I would love to return to the apple orchard on my grandfather’s farm and read a book in my tree one more time.  Are you ever too old to climb an apple tree?




the worn blanket flung

over the bough

of the apple tree

is an old woman

she hugs the limb

reaches for a branch

or an apple

barely beyond

the crook

of her fingers

she would dare

to set her foot

on the branch

and the next

step up

put the orchard

below her

rise above

the canopy

the valley

the meander of the river


she waits

in the dapple

clings to the branch

endures the tremble

delays the fall


Published as:  ‘dapple’, 1998, Green’s magazine (Autumn 1998) XXXVII (1)


© Jane Tims

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  1. I love your description of your favorite apple tree and how it could be different things for you. My favorite tree while growing up was a very tall hemlock tree I used to climb as high as I could go. I felt so safe in its strong branches and would daydream there for hours, soaking up the energy it offered.

    Wonderful poem, Jane. I love apple-picking in September and I will think of the old woman in your poem reaching for the apple when I visit the orchard – it’s not that far off now…


    Barbara Rodgers

    August 10, 2011 at 6:11 pm

  2. Beautiful poem! Love that metaphor of blanket = old woman…beautiful. Maybe because of my grandmothers I do associate warmth and comfort with older ladies…and they always have cool old blankets too!



    August 10, 2011 at 3:37 pm

    • Hi. Thanks for visiting and for your comments. I’ll visit your site again and see if you have more poems. … Jane


      jane tims

      August 10, 2011 at 5:37 pm

  3. Great post today! I really enjoyed reading it. Poetry and creative writing is something we all can enjoy. Thanks again for writing this.


    Family Values

    August 9, 2011 at 2:55 pm

    • Hi. Thanks for the comment. I like your ‘Rules of Creative Writing’. Jane


      jane tims

      August 10, 2011 at 7:14 am

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